前言:想要寫出一篇令人眼前一亮的文章嗎?我們特意為您整理了5篇以希望為話題的作文范文,相信會(huì)為您的寫作帶來(lái)幫助,發(fā)現(xiàn)更多的寫作思路和靈感。
【關(guān)鍵詞】話題作文;擬題
How to give the topic thesis to draft examination questions fast
Ao Wei
【Abstract】The topic thesis is the optional thesis, the free thesis, because it had not stipulated that the topic and the literature style, the student may write the literary style which with the most adept mode of writing oneself most excel, like this is advantageous in the high first-level school selects the talented person, therefore appears repeatedly in each kind of test in recent years, drafts examination questions is the student deeply feels the thorny question. The author according to these years’s teaching experience, will chat several methods which and the colleague drafted examination questions fast negotiates, looks can give the teaching to bring the help from now on.【Key words】Topic thesis; Drafting examination questions
話題作文是自選作文、自由作文,由于它沒有規(guī)定題目和體裁,學(xué)生可以用自己最拿手的寫法寫出自己最擅長(zhǎng)的文體,這樣有利于高一級(jí)學(xué)校選拔人才,所以在近幾年的各種考試中頻頻出現(xiàn),擬題是學(xué)生深感棘手的問(wèn)題。筆者根據(jù)這幾年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn),談?wù)効焖贁M題的幾種方法與同行蹉商,望能給今后教學(xué)帶來(lái)幫助。
我認(rèn)為快速給話題作文擬題有以下幾種方法:
1 揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短,定文體
緊扣話題,調(diào)動(dòng)積累,選用自己最拿手的文體是快速擬題的基本前提。因?yàn)槿魏挝恼露际怯畜w栽的,不講文體,隨心所欲的寫作,只會(huì)寫出結(jié)構(gòu)松散,不合章法,非驢非馬的“四不像”文章。況且,話題作文只要求文體不限,并非不講文體。如以“樹”為話題,可以定成記敘文《種樹的故事》、《記一次有意義的植樹活動(dòng)》;可以寫成散文――《柳樹贊》《難忘的那片樹林》;可以定成議論文-《生存的希望,植樹造林》《談植樹的價(jià)值》等。
2 善補(bǔ)題,以小見大
在話題前面或后面作適當(dāng)?shù)脑鲅a(bǔ),對(duì)寫作范圍加以限制,能使話題由大變小,由虛變實(shí),由抽象變具體,也是常見的快速擬題的方法。如:以語(yǔ)文課為話題,我們可以擬為《生動(dòng)的一節(jié)語(yǔ)文課》、《我愛語(yǔ)文課》《未來(lái)的語(yǔ)文課》《語(yǔ)文課暢想》等等,這些擬題從多角度縮小寫作范圍,選材范圍更加集中,有利于我們的寫作從小處著眼順利展開。
3 巧修辭,新穎鮮活
根據(jù)指定的語(yǔ)言環(huán)境、文體內(nèi)容,靈活巧妙地使用修辭手法,可以讓文題生動(dòng)形象,含蓄雋永,使文章錦上添花。如:以音樂為話題,我們可以擬為《心愿》、《母親》、《愛的奉獻(xiàn)》等新穎鮮活,讓人過(guò)目不忘的題目。4 巧點(diǎn)化,妙趣橫生
對(duì)影片名、歌曲名、古詩(shī)名以及成語(yǔ)俗語(yǔ)等適當(dāng)點(diǎn)化,進(jìn)行套裝、借用,仿造之后作為文章的題目,常常典雅大方,妙趣橫生,也是考場(chǎng)話題作文快帶速擬題的高明之舉。如:以我為話題可選用歌詞《我的思戀》《最近比較煩,》,以音樂為話題可以用歌曲《感恩的心》等等,用這種方法命題,通俗明了,貼切自然,并為大家喜聞樂見。
5 注重標(biāo)題的作用
標(biāo)題是文章內(nèi)容和讀者情感心理之間的第一個(gè)接觸點(diǎn),標(biāo)題是讓閱卷老師慧眼為之一亮的第一點(diǎn),標(biāo)題是讓人一見鐘情的因子。標(biāo)題也提供給讀者窺視文章內(nèi)容的獨(dú)特視角。
6 把握擬題的原則
確切、精煉、生動(dòng)、新穎、有意蘊(yùn),有文采,確切,指的是符合文章內(nèi)容,同時(shí)也指遣詞造句符合規(guī)范,精煉,指的是標(biāo)題字?jǐn)?shù)恰當(dāng),不宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)。生動(dòng),指的是題目具有可讀性,饒有情趣。新穎,指的是有新視角,新思路,新感悟,給人新鮮感。有意蘊(yùn),指的是有內(nèi)在的含義。有文采,指的是標(biāo)題有詩(shī)意,有文學(xué)韻味。
7 明確 的要求
標(biāo)題范圍盡量要小,要從自己確立的角度出發(fā)不要太大太泛; 要合理出新。如果標(biāo)題太大,可以采用副標(biāo)題的方式加以限制。標(biāo)題不能過(guò)長(zhǎng),一般不要超過(guò)8個(gè)字,標(biāo)題過(guò)長(zhǎng)則顯得松散。標(biāo)題要含蓄,把思維蘊(yùn)涵于形象的標(biāo)題之中,含蓄能起到言有盡而意無(wú)窮的作用,且能加深閱卷老師對(duì)文章內(nèi)容的印象和體會(huì)。
擬一個(gè)好題目,把題目演繹成一個(gè)生動(dòng)的故事,用故事表達(dá)一個(gè)新穎獨(dú)特的思想。擬題時(shí)要善于聯(lián)想。 聯(lián)想,就是由某人某事或事理推想到與其相關(guān)的其他人其他事物或其他事理的思維過(guò)程。
8 學(xué)會(huì)擬題的方法
修辭法
(1)比喻 《我渴望陽(yáng)光》以陽(yáng)光喻暖人的關(guān)愛,簡(jiǎn)潔含蓄,如將喻體換成“熱情幫助”之類,則索然無(wú)味。又如《我心中的鏡子》、《家,我們成長(zhǎng)的搖籃》,這些設(shè)喻佳題也都富于文學(xué)色彩。
(2)借代 遼寧大連一位考生緊扣母親烏黑發(fā)絲中的白發(fā)展開敘寫,揭示歲月無(wú)情、母愛無(wú)價(jià)這一真諦,給文章擬題目《黑白債》,借色彩代本體,又亮出線索,寄托深情。又如《人生需要掌聲》,這一標(biāo)題借“掌聲”代“鼓勵(lì)”,也很有創(chuàng)意。
(3)比擬 《花兒又快活了》《讀山千遍真有趣》前者運(yùn)用擬人辭格讓花兒具有人的感情,后者把“水”擬作能“讀”之物,用的是擬物辭格。
(4)對(duì)偶 《書山有路,學(xué)海無(wú)涯》《做有心人,讀有用書》這兩例都將文旨濃縮在整齊對(duì)稱的句子中,體現(xiàn)出考生善于推敲的語(yǔ)言功夫。
(5)對(duì)比 《高調(diào)做事,低調(diào)做人》高調(diào)與低調(diào)形成對(duì)比,使得標(biāo)題包含哲理,令人回味。(6)雙關(guān) 《我最需要一劑良藥》文中“良藥”既能治腿疾有能治心病,一語(yǔ)雙關(guān),內(nèi)蘊(yùn)豐富。
(7)設(shè)問(wèn) 《錯(cuò)誤?正確!》先問(wèn)后答,以簡(jiǎn)馭繁,又穿插標(biāo)點(diǎn),構(gòu)思巧妙。
(8)反問(wèn) 《我們的素質(zhì)教育,難道不需要發(fā)展嗎?》反問(wèn)中飽含著擺脫應(yīng)試教育重負(fù)的強(qiáng)烈愿望,觀點(diǎn)鮮明,言辭懇切。
(9)頂真 《讀書快樂 快樂讀書》《活讀書 書讀活》這兩例運(yùn)用頂真兼回環(huán)辭格,風(fēng)趣地展示讀書之趣、讀書之樂和讀書之法。
(10)反語(yǔ) 《我發(fā)現(xiàn)了家中的“小偷”》家中幾次“失竊”,“作案者”原來(lái)是瞞著別人給災(zāi)區(qū)寄錢的一家人的三個(gè)成員,題中用“小偷”,貶詞褒用,凸現(xiàn)一家人的高尚品德,幽默風(fēng)趣。
(11)引用 《腹有詩(shī)書氣自華》、《為有源頭活水來(lái)》前者形象地表現(xiàn)讀書的作用,后者揭示消除陳舊的思想方法,引用名句作題目,能較好地體現(xiàn)考生的文學(xué)積累和修養(yǎng),給人耳目一新之感。
以“家庭”為話題――《我要的幸?!法D―孫燕姿
以“心愿”為話題――《一千零一個(gè)愿望》
以“素質(zhì)教育”為話題-《救救孩子》(魯迅《狂人日記》 )
以“關(guān)注生活”為話題,寫生活對(duì)人的考驗(yàn)-《讓暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)得更猛烈些吧》(高爾基《海燕》)以“友誼”為話題――《百年孤獨(dú)》――加西亞 馬爾克斯同名小說(shuō)
以道歉為話題的英語(yǔ)范文【一】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination on International Business English Writing you gave last Friday. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.
I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital. Please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make-up examination. I will come to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hua
以道歉為話題的英語(yǔ)范文【二】
Dear Jerry:
Hello! My best friend, we have not seen for a few weeks. A few days ago, I held a party in my house. There were a lot of friends coming to the party. We played games, sang popular songs and had a big meal. But I felt unhappy during the party, for I failed to invite my best friend, you. I write this letter to get your forgiveness for my mistake. I know you are fairly broad-minded.
To show my sincerity, I will have another party for you. It will be pleasant to invite you here. It is a good opportunity for you to meet many friends that you have not seen for a long time. The party will begin at seven o'clock on next Sunday evening in my house. Is it possible for you to come to the party? The party will not be complete without you. Wish to see you and get your forgiveness. If you have some good advises for the party, please write to me.
Best wishes to you!
Sincerely Yours,
Jess
以道歉為話題的英語(yǔ)范文【三】
I’m very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.(topic)
Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning. He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents. As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I’ll have to help him in the first place.
I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.
Wish you have a good time this weekend!
以抱怨為話題的英語(yǔ)范文【一】
I am one of the student who critical of restaurant of our seminary. We have been informed frequently that with the declining quality of the restaurant of our school it is intolerable to meal at school. It becomes the source of great complaint by student. Therefore please give me an access to put forward some disadvantage of the restaurant in order to be placed more stress on
First the expression of the students ‘face Witness that how unsavory the food is .Secondly insect is conceal in the vegetable there are times when we are prepare to have . Thirdly the price of the restaurant is too high. Finally tableware not be sanitized is used in the restaurant.
Please take it into account or it will give rise to a series of problem. In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused. I hold a belief that students will enjoy themselves when have a meal in the restaurant of our seminary.
I am looking forward to seeing the changes of the restaurant
以抱怨為話題的英語(yǔ)范文【二】
I venture to write to complain about the quality of the digital camera I bought last Friday at your store. During the five days the camera has been in my possession, problems have emerged one after another. For one thing, the screen is always black, making the camera no different from a traditional one. For another, the battery is distressing as it supports the camera’s operation for only two hours.
Therefore, I wish to declare a refund. I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.
以抱怨為話題的英語(yǔ)范文【三】
以社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)為話題的高考英語(yǔ)范文【一】
Social network websites have rapidly increased in popularity over the past few years. Many people have registered and become members of some social network websites, such as Facebook, Kaixin and Twitter. These websites have become a part of their daily life.
People’s opinions vary greatly on social network sites. Supporters regard social network websites as places to share feelings and experiences with their friends. Besides, they say these websites provide various interesting games and can help people relax. However, opponents think it is difficult to protect users’ privacy on social network sites. Apart from that, they maintain that users’ chances to gain employment may be reduced as more and more employers take the images which users portray on social network sites into consideration.
As far as I’m concerned, social network sites serve as a good platform for us to make new friends and keep in touch with old ones. Still, we should be aware of the potential dangers involved. It is very necessary to adjust our privacy settings to control who has access to our personal information.
以社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)為話題的高考英語(yǔ)范文【二】
Social Networks are groups of people who share interests and who interact in a variety of ways via software on websites. These include file-sharing, chatting, messaging, exchanging photos/video etc. Social network sites are usually free to join. Include Myspace,Facebook,Bebo,Orkut,LinkedIn and so on.
We define social network sites as web-based services that allow individuals to construct a public or semi-public profile within a bounded system, articulate a list of other users with whom they share a connection, and view and traverse their list of connections and those made by others within the system. The nature and nomenclature of these connections may vary from site to site.
以社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)為話題的高考英語(yǔ)范文【三】
In recent years, social network sites like Renren and Kaixin have rapidly gained popularity among all kinds of people. Many people spend a lot of time on those sites chatting, making friends and playing games. Those sites have become a part of their life.
以全球變暖,溫室效應(yīng)為話題的英語(yǔ)范文【一】
As is subtly revealed in the cartoons above, global warming is a real threat to our world. In the first drawing, the glaciers in the polar region are rapidly melting owing to global warming. In the second picture, a homeless polar bear is staying on an isolated big block of ice.
The purpose of these portrayals is to show us that global warming is a looming threat to people all over the world. To begin with, global warming leads to the rise of sea levels. Large sections Chinese coastal regions would gradually disappear under rising sea levels because of global warming, severely impairing the country’s social and economic progress. China’s long coastline is the base for about 70% of the large cities, over half of the domestic population and nearly 60% of the national economy. With comparatively-advanced social, economic and cultural developments, China’s off-shore regions will suffer great losses if the sea level does not cease rising. In addition, global warming increases the possibility and intensity of extreme weather such as hurricanes and snowstorms. Hurricanes and typhoons have become stronger and longer-lasting over the past 30 years. These upswings correlate with a rise in sea surface temperatures due to global warming.
Taking into account the devastating effects of global warming, we can draw the conclusion that global warming is a great threat to our world. Facing the growing menace of global warming, more scientific and active preventive measures should be taken on a larger scale to change for the better.
以全球變暖,溫室效應(yīng)為話題的英語(yǔ)范文【二】
People around the world may feel that the climate has been getting steadily warmer and warmer in recent years. Places which used to be abundant in snowfall have frequently experienced snowfree(無(wú)雪的) winters. Drought lasts longer in some dry areas. People find that without air conditioners they could hardly work or fall asleep on hotter summer days.